Wednesday, 11 February 2015

My train ride in Switzerland

I remember when
I heard the sound of
chugging drifting through
my head, in through one ear and
out through the other.

I remember looking at my
grand parents lurking
through the train and
staring at me
in a suspicious way
as if I had made a big mistake
and it made me anxious.

I remember a linger of hot dogs
tickled my nose.
I wanted more than ever
to be in Hanmer Springs
in the hot pools.

I remember I leaned back
into the seat and
felt the softness under me.


  1. I love "I remember a linger of hot dogs tickled my nose." Great!

    1. thank you so much mr A


  2. Well done on getting your blog underway for 2015. I am looking forward to reading more. Mr A.